What I meant to say at the very end was "By all means modify it to keep continuity" (nm)

Posted by Brett (Maverick) Lambert from 209.5.179.15 on October 03, 1999 at 19:57:42:

In Reply to: Chapter X of the Remnants of the Dark World Order posted by Brett (Maverick) Lambert on October 03, 1999 at 19:56:01:

: Well, here it is. Here's my take on Shorty's fan fic. I hope you
: like it.

: Chapter X

: Brett, James, Shorty, Michaelson, Indy, and Meg made their way from
: the cliff to the forest armed with their guns hoping to make it back
: to base.

: "Ah, geez, our plane has crashed, how are we supposed to make it back
: to base?" Indy complained.

: "This is heavy" Shorty said.

: "Hmmm..." James thought. "I guess we'll have to find the nearest town
: to get to the Phoenix base and debrief Micah on what has happened."

: "He's right." Michaelson said. "I guess we'll have to take a little
: journey."

: "What if there are more DWO troops looming around?" Meg asked.

: "We'll be ready for them!!" Brett said, loading his rifle.

: "No..." said Shorty, then James and Brett joined Shorty in unison.
: "YES! MAN!" The three gave each other high fives.

: Meg, Michaelson, and Indy grinned with amusement.

: "You three," Meg commented. "It's a wonder Shorty isn't the brother
: of Brett and James."

: Brett, James, and Shorty looked at each other in wonderment,
: considering the thought then they quickly dismissed it.

: "Naw!" said Brett.

: The group journeyed through the thick forest hoping there won't be
: anymore troops around.

: Suddenly, footsteps could be heard near them. The group raised their
: guns in the direction of the sound.

: "Who's there?" Indy sternly asked.

: There was no response.

: "I'll go in for a closer look and investigate," said Brett. "Cover
: me."

: "Will do sir," said Michaelson.

: Brett went into the thicker portion of the forest, rifle raised aiming
: at the air. Brett was nervous as hell. Suddenly a figure emerged
: from the woods. It was a woman.

: "Don't shoot!" the woman pleaded.

: This woman was drop dead gorgeous. She looked like someone straight
: from a James Bond movie. In fact she looked a lot like Domino from
: "Thunderball" to be precise. She was dressed in a green tank top and
: biege short shorts just like Lara Croft. She had a gorgeous body,
: very voluptuous indeed.

: Brett lowered his rifle and gave a sigh of relief.

: "Oh, thank God. I thought you were one of them. I'm so glad it's a
: beuatiful woman like you!" Brett said.

: The two gazed at each other and felt some chemistry between them.

: "So, what brings you here Miss...?" Brett asked.

: "Alice Kovacs, and who might you be?"

: "Brett Lambert. Nice to meet you." The two shook hands.

: "The DWO. That's what brings me here. They have overrun our small
: town and now control it. It's like living in a fascist society. It's
: just awful. I must flee my town to where the DWO isn't," Alice
: explained.

: "Hmmm... That's what we're after. Our organization is bent on
: completely banishing the Dark World Order for good. Now do you know
: where the nearest town with an airport is?"

: "About twenty miles from here."

: "That's a long way, would you be interested in guiding us. Maybe you
: can join our group and help get rid of the DWO."

: "I would love to!!" said Alice.

: "Wonderful, now come, meet the rest of the group."

: The two went back to the group. James, Michaelson, Shorty, Meg, and
: Indy raised their guns at the forest. Brett raised his hands in the
: air.

: "It's all right! It's all right!" Brett said. "It was only a
: citizen, no DWO troops guys."

: The rest of the group breathed a sigh of relief. They then saw Alice,
: and the male members of the group gazed at the extremely beautiful
: woman. Jaws began dropping.

: "Guys, this is Alice Kovacs, she'll be our new member, she's
: determined, as we are to take down the DWO." Brett said.

: "Alice, this is my brother James, other members here are Short Round,
: Michaelson, Indy, and Meg."

: The guys greeted her with enthusiasm.

: "Yo, what's up?" Shorty said to Alice.

: "She will guide us to the nearest city with an airport so we can
: debrief Micah." Brett told the group.

: "Wonderful dude!!!" Shorty exclaimed.

: The seven journeyed off through the woods for about 10 miles. Since
: they have been walking for so long, they decided they would camp at a
: safe spot halfway through the journey and continue the rest of the way
: tommorow.

: ***

: It was morning, and the seven planned on continuing, but they were
: wary that there still might be some DWO troops around. They decided
: that James should go off to test whether the coast was clear.

: James began walking forward.. He slowly walked step by step, looking
: each ways to make sure there weren't any troops. Knowing that the
: coast was clear, James gave a thumbs up signal to proceed when all of
: a sudden, James stepped on a landmine!!! It blew up and it blew off
: both of James legs. He lied in a pool full of blood screaming in
: agony.

: James woke up with sweat all over him. It turned out to be a really
: bad dream.

: "Thank God I'm alive!!" James said.

: Shorty quickly got up. "Dude! What's the matter? What happened?"

: "I had the most terrible nightmare that I was walking straight down
: that way and I walked over a landmine and my legs blew off. It was
: awful!" James explained.

: "Oh jeez! That's heavy! But don't worry dude! It was only a dream,
: it never happened dude!" Shorty reassured James.

: Pretty soon afterward, the group continued to get to a town. After
: many hours of walking they finally made it to a city and got on the
: earliest available flight to the base.

: The seven received their airline tickets and boarded the plane.

: "Oh, boy! I sure do hope they play Back to the Future as the
: in-flight movie! I gotta hear some Huey Lewis, dude!" Shorty said.

: ---

: Meanwhile at the DWO base...

: "Any word on the recovering of the bodies of those unfortunate Phoenix
: Members" Spaltic asked the leader of the troops.

: "Uh, they haven't been recovered yet, sir," the leader said.

: "Find them immediately or you will suffer the same fate as those
: unfortunate Phoenix memebers." Spaltic bitterly yelled.

: "Yes, my lord, we'll find them"
: -------

:
: Well I hope you liked my rendition guys. If I made any continuity
: mistakes, Shorty, by all means mo

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: : Well, here it is.  Here's my take on Shorty's fan fic.  I hope you 
: : like it.

: : <U>Chapter X</U>

: : Brett, James, Shorty, Michaelson, Indy, and Meg made their way from 
: : the cliff to the forest armed with their guns hoping to make it back 
: : to base.

: : "Ah, geez, our plane has crashed, how are we supposed to make it back 
: : to base?" Indy complained.

: : "This is heavy" Shorty said.

: : "Hmmm..." James thought.  "I guess we'll have to find the nearest town 
: : to get to the Phoenix base and debrief Micah on what has happened."

: : "He's right." Michaelson said.  "I guess we'll have to take a little 
: : journey."

: : "What if there are more DWO troops looming around?" Meg asked.

: : "We'll be ready for them!!" Brett said, loading his rifle.

: : "No..." said Shorty, then James and Brett joined Shorty in unison. 
: : "YES!  MAN!"  The three gave each other high fives.

: : Meg, Michaelson, and Indy grinned with amusement.

: : "You three," Meg commented.  "It's a wonder Shorty isn't the brother 
: : of Brett and James."

: : Brett, James, and Shorty looked at each other in wonderment, 
: : considering the thought then they quickly dismissed it.

: : "Naw!" said Brett.

: : The group journeyed through the thick forest hoping there won't be 
: : anymore troops around.

: : Suddenly, footsteps could be heard near them.  The group raised their 
: : guns in the direction of the sound.

: : "Who's there?"  Indy sternly asked.

: : There was no response.

: : "I'll go in for a closer look and investigate," said Brett.  "Cover 
: : me."

: : "Will do sir," said Michaelson.

: : Brett went into the thicker portion of the forest, rifle raised aiming 
: : at the air.  Brett was nervous as hell.  Suddenly a figure emerged 
: : from the woods.  It was a woman.

: : "Don't shoot!" the woman pleaded.

: : This woman was drop dead gorgeous.  She looked like someone straight 
: : from a James Bond movie.  In fact she looked a lot like Domino from 
: : "Thunderball" to be precise.  She was dressed in a green tank top and 
: : biege short shorts just like Lara Croft.  She had a gorgeous body, 
: : very voluptuous indeed.

: : Brett lowered his rifle and gave a sigh of relief.

: : "Oh, thank God.  I thought you were one of them.  I'm so glad it's a 
: : beuatiful woman like you!" Brett said.

: : The two gazed at each other and felt some chemistry between them.

: : "So, what brings you here Miss...?" Brett asked.

: : "Alice Kovacs, and who might you be?"

: : "Brett Lambert.  Nice to meet you." The two shook hands.

: : "The DWO.  That's what brings me here.  They have overrun our small 
: : town and now control it.  It's like living in a fascist society.  It's 
: : just awful.  I must flee my town to where the DWO isn't," Alice 
: : explained.

: : "Hmmm... That's what we're after.  Our organization is bent on 
: : completely banishing the Dark World Order for good.  Now do you know 
: : where the nearest town with an airport is?"

: : "About twenty miles from here."

: : "That's a long way, would you be interested in guiding us.  Maybe you 
: : can join our group and help get rid of the DWO."

: : "I would love to!!" said Alice.

: : "Wonderful, now come, meet the rest of the group."

: : The two went back to the group.  James, Michaelson, Shorty, Meg, and 
: : Indy raised their guns at the forest.  Brett raised his hands in the 
: : air.

: : "It's all right!  It's all right!" Brett said.  "It was only a 
: : citizen, no DWO troops guys."

: : The rest of the group breathed a sigh of relief.  They then saw Alice, 
: : and the male members of the group gazed at the extremely beautiful 
: : woman.  Jaws began dropping.

: : "Guys, this is Alice Kovacs, she'll be our new member, she's 
: : determined, as we are to take down the DWO." Brett said.

: : "Alice, this is my brother James, other members here are Short Round, 
: : Michaelson, Indy, and Meg."

: : The guys greeted her with enthusiasm.

: : "Yo, what's up?" Shorty said to Alice.

: : "She will guide us to the nearest city with an airport so we can 
: : debrief Micah." Brett told the group.

: : "Wonderful dude!!!" Shorty exclaimed.

: : The seven journeyed off through the woods for about 10 miles.  Since 
: : they have been walking for so long, they decided they would camp at a 
: : safe spot halfway through the journey and continue the rest of the way 
: : tommorow.

: : ***

: : It was morning, and the seven planned on continuing, but they were 
: : wary that there still might be some DWO troops around.  They decided 
: : that James should go off to test whether the coast was clear.

: : James began walking forward..  He slowly walked step by step, looking 
: : each ways to make sure there weren't any troops.  Knowing that the 
: : coast was clear, James gave a thumbs up signal to proceed when all of 
: : a sudden, James stepped on a landmine!!!  It blew up and it blew off 
: : both of James legs.  He lied in a pool full of blood screaming in 
: : agony.

: : James woke up with sweat all over him.  It turned out to be a really 
: : bad dream.

: : "Thank God I'm alive!!" James said.

: : Shorty quickly got up.  "Dude!  What's the matter?  What happened?"

: : "I had the most terrible nightmare that I was walking straight down 
: : that way and I walked over a landmine and my legs blew off.  It was 
: : awful!" James explained.

: : "Oh jeez!  That's heavy!  But don't worry dude!  It was only a dream, 
: : it never happened dude!" Shorty reassured James.

: : Pretty soon afterward, the group continued to get to a town.  After 
: : many hours of walking they finally made it to a city and got on the 
: : earliest available flight to the base.

: : The seven received their airline tickets and boarded the plane.

: : "Oh, boy!  I sure do hope they play Back to the Future as the 
: : in-flight movie!  I gotta hear some Huey Lewis, dude!" Shorty said.

: : ---

: : Meanwhile at the DWO base...

: : "Any word on the recovering of the bodies of those unfortunate Phoenix 
: : Members" Spaltic asked the leader of the troops.

: : "Uh, they haven't been recovered yet, sir," the leader said.

: : "Find them immediately or you will suffer the same fate as those 
: : unfortunate Phoenix memebers." Spaltic bitterly yelled.

: : "Yes, my lord, we'll find them"
: : -------

: : 
: : Well I hope you liked my rendition guys.  If I made any continuity 
: : mistakes, Shorty, by all means mo

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