Posted by . from cujo.brio.com on March 02, 2000 at 13:43:27:
In Reply to: Oh, and it's a healthy jump in time, not every last minute can be covered. [nm] posted by the Fiddler on March 02, 2000 at 13:01:16:
not every minute needs to be covered but that was too huge a jump in time. it was never explained how fiddler knew he would need a tommygun. not even explained as a hunch.
and it was not explained why he is still walking with her after she told him everything she knew. and what about the e mail she gave him in chapter 5?
no offense fiddler, but deirdre is right. i hope she doesnt remove anything since your chapter was cool. i just hope she fills in the blanks.