I wonder how many let downs and drafts of Chapter 8 there'll be(NM)

Posted by Short Round from ABD85A7D.ipt.aol.com on March 02, 2000 at 16:09:29:

In Reply to: Objections! posted by Deirdre Campbell on March 02, 2000 at 06:28:22:

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: Hi,

: This might come a bit late, since the new chapter logs have already been posted (actually I had been planning to tell Goodsport not to post them yet) but due to some inconsistencies in Chapter 8, may I please request for another revision?

: Fiddler I mean no harm, your chapter was good. However I can't sleep, thinking of some things that you unintentionally missed out (e.g. Why your character is here at this part and appears somewhere else without explaination/s--- it's very unhealthy for me and my lifestyle *sigh* so pls. bear with post-traumatic me). =}

: All I am going to do is fill in some gaps (not delete anything important, just minor stuff for revision -- you are still the author of the chapter).

: Chapter 9 will be up by next week for sure and I promise everyone to give you a suspense-filled, action packed and semi-surreal chapter that you won't forget so easily (*vision*: Indyfans waking up screaming in the middle of the night, sweating profusely and becoming paranoid... hehe).

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: Helps save the endangered species!

: Deirdre Campbell

Follow Ups:

• the latest chapter 8 was great. i think that deirdre just wants to fill it out a little [nm] . 16:19:33 3/02/2000 (1)
  • Thank you for agreeing,& Yes, I just want to fill-in some minor details.[ns] DC 00:30:44 3/03/2000 (0)

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