Posted by Goodsport from 216.32.185.198 on August 03, 1999 at 10:55:34:
In Reply to: whoa sorry for maknig it tooo huge.(nm) posted by Short Round on August 01, 1999 at 16:21:06:
Cool story! :)
Just one thing... split up those huge paragraphs a little by using the Enter (or Return) button. The huge paragraphs on the screen are harder to read for an old man like me! :D
I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
-G