Re: Chapter 1 Indiana Jones and Hitlers Stronghold

Posted by Dawn Jones Lechner from 149.143.209.70 on July 25, 2000 at 13:32:40:

In Reply to: Chapter 1 Indiana Jones and Hitlers Stronghold posted by Gordon Whyte on July 24, 2000 at 22:50:33:

Dude cool story. I like the beginning real attention getter

It's kinda choppy but wonderful characterization and
Keep up the good work. Tell me if I can help
right it. Read my stor. Indiana JOnes and the myster of the jaguar.
Thanks. Good job so far.

Dawn

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