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Posted by Ulla from 99.oak01.pon.net on August 27, 1999 at 13:19:31:
In Reply to: Re: "Let's Hear it Ulla"-my poem posted by sas c|:) on August 27, 1999 at 10:12:19:
: : Hallo, everybody. This is an "Indy poem" I composed as a school assignment. I had to write a rhyming poem under the topic of "Sunshine", but, as you can see, I guess I got a little TOO creative. All I ask is that though I may not have it "copyrighted", please refrain from "cheating" on my hard work. (I trust all of you. You are, after all, "Indyfans"!!)
: Very well done Ulla! Your poem sounds great and the story within it has a fine development. But you're nasty: The cliffhanger at the end is very teasing. What great mysteries lie beneath this temple?? Have you ever thought about a sequel?
: sas c|:)
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Sas c|:) !!
You came back again! The cliffhanger at the end is the beauty of it though, I will definately give it some thought. How bout' Ulla accompanying him and the "booby traps" from Raiders could be activated? Not very accurate for a MAYAN temple, but it's Indy!!
Thanks for the suggestion!
Adventurously,
Ulla