Some corrections for chapter 2, Goodsport.

Posted by the Fiddler from spider-wd041.proxy.aol.com on January 09, 2000 at 11:36:46:

Just above the picture of the black widow this appears:

He had been so caught up in the business at hand-namely, pre-flight procedures--that he had not even thought about the type of spider that had caught his attention, or at least part of his attention.

It should read:

He had been so caught up in the business at hand--namely: pre-flight procedures--that he had not even thought about the type of spider that had caught his attention, or at least part of his attention.

Then at the very end I called Indiana Riggs "Indy" change that to "Indiana Riggs" for clarification purposes.

Update these changes wit the next chapter logs please,
and thanks for editing that one sentance for me, I goofed it up pretty bad =)

(remove 'spam' from my email address)

Follow Ups:

• I think you mean Chapter 3 (I'm just pointing this out so Deirdre doesn't get mad!). :D (nm) Goodsport 12:41:29 1/09/2000 (2)
  • No need to worry, I don't get mad THAT easily. Deirdre 17:15:10 1/09/2000 (1)
    • Yeah, I meant chapter 3... just hit the wrong key. the Fiddler 20:18:57 1/09/2000 (0)

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