I think you mean Chapter 3 (I'm just pointing this out so Deirdre doesn't get mad!). :D (nm)

Posted by Goodsport from adsl-216-102-199-185.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net on January 09, 2000 at 12:41:29:

In Reply to: Some corrections for chapter 2, Goodsport. posted by the Fiddler on January 09, 2000 at 11:36:46:

: Just above the picture of the black widow this appears:

: He had been so caught up in the business at hand-namely, pre-flight procedures--that he had not even thought about the type of spider that had caught his attention, or at least part of his attention.

: It should read:

: He had been so caught up in the business at hand--namely: pre-flight procedures--that he had not even thought about the type of spider that had caught his attention, or at least part of his attention.

: Then at the very end I called Indiana Riggs "Indy" change that to "Indiana Riggs" for clarification purposes.

:
: Update these changes wit the next chapter logs please,
: and thanks for editing that one sentance for me, I goofed it up pretty bad =)

: (remove 'spam' from my email address)

Follow Ups:

• No need to worry, I don't get mad THAT easily. Deirdre 17:15:10 1/09/2000 (1)
  • Yeah, I meant chapter 3... just hit the wrong key. the Fiddler 20:18:57 1/09/2000 (0)

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