Re: Looking for constructive criticism on Golden Death Forum novel

Posted by Tessa from ce.tel.ilstu.edu on April 19, 1999 at 10:37:35:

In Reply to: Looking for constructive criticism on Golden Death Forum novel posted by walker on April 19, 1999 at 10:18:59:

I think you handled Drake's maturity ok. It was kind of fast for me, but then I like fast. But walker, where's the girl that Indy's supposed to seduced? (Unless I missed something) But overall, it was a good attention grabber and kept me interested. Good show.
Now if you could figure out where to go with our current forum novel...

Tessa

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• Yeah, I agree walker 11:02:40 4/19/99 (1)
  • Your welcome and... Tessa 11:20:01 4/19/99 (0)

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