Yeah, I agree

Posted by walker from 38.152.176.170 on April 19, 1999 at 11:02:40:

In Reply to: Re: Looking for constructive criticism on Golden Death Forum novel posted by Tessa on April 19, 1999 at 10:37:35:

: I think you handled Drake's maturity ok. It was kind of fast for me, but then I like fast. But walker, where's the girl that Indy's supposed to seduced? (Unless I missed something) But overall, it was a good attention grabber and kept me interested. Good show.
: Now if you could figure out where to go with our current forum novel...

: Tessa

I agree, he matured pretty fast. Quite honestly I was getting tired. The story kept going and going and going. I kind of wanted to just get done. Others have made the same comment, that it happened rather quickly (probably 2 or 3 weeks time in the story).
As to the girl, you're right! The story was so far along when I picked it up, I didn't even think about it. Yikes! Like having a Bond movie without a "Bond" girl - or even an Austin Powers movie for that matter.

Sorry about not contributing to the current novel. I've been on the road a great deal lately. You'd think that would give me time to write, but I haven't bothered as I figured that by the time I got back, somebody else would have continued on in my absence.
Thanks very much for your input Tessa. I really appreciate it!
walker

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: : I think you handled Drake's maturity ok. It was kind of fast for me, but then I like fast. But walker, where's the girl that Indy's supposed to seduced? (Unless I missed something) But overall, it was a good attention grabber and kept me interested. Good show.
: : Now if you could figure out where to go with our current forum novel...

: : Tessa

: I agree, he matured pretty fast.  Quite honestly I was getting tired.  The story kept going and going and going.  I kind of wanted to just get done.  Others have made the same comment, that it happened rather quickly (probably 2 or 3 weeks time in the story).
: As to the girl, you're right!  The story was so far along when I picked it up, I didn't even think about it.  Yikes!  Like having a Bond movie without a "Bond" girl - or even an Austin Powers movie for that matter.

: Sorry about not contributing to the current novel.  I've been on the road a great deal lately.  You'd think that would give me time to write, but I haven't bothered as I figured that by the time I got back, somebody else would have continued on in my absence.  
: Thanks very much for your input Tessa.  I really appreciate it!
: walker

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